Low Fat Goal, Motivation and Conflict  

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Goal needs to be urgent.
The goal can change but it has to be more urgent.
Smaller goals lead to the bigger goal.
Getting somewhere mentally and physically
Call to Adventure…Damned if you do…damned if you don’t….or suckie, suckie.

Every character needs to want something to make the pages Snapple and pop.
Conflict is two dogs and one bone.
External—Plot
Internal—Feel it

Start conflict at the beginning.
There is a reason they will be called to adventure.  They have to go themselves.

Internal:  Walk in with their problem.  Make it hard to deal with the plot.  Baggage they come with.  Everything should work to develop the book.  How they hold themselves and stand.

Character and reader live through a scene.

Five Key Scenes:  Meeting.  First, kiss.  Love scene.  Dark moment.  Resolution.

Theme:  What is your character going to learn?  It has to mean something to you, the writer.

She had it—she wants it back.  She has to grow the hell up.

Can I feel it?  Can I see it?  Is the material I can work with?  Is this something I can see?  Is this a good business choice?

What’s mine is mine and what’s everyone else’s is up for grabs.

Choose the weapon:  What he fights with at the end of the book.  Learn to use what he has in a different way.

Promise to deliver.  Give characters a chance to come face to face with their dreams.  Self-realization:  Impact the characters.  Pick the threads to unravel the knot.  Face to face with your dreams can be scary.  Give your characters a reason to rethink themselves.  What is the end of this character?  Can he/she go on the rest of their lives?  Show signs of possible growth.  If you plant an acorn you can reasonably expect an oak.

Goal, Motivation and Conflict: The Building Blocks of Good Fiction

Low Calorie Female Archetypes In Romance Writing  

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1. The Boss



2. The Seductress 































3. The Spunky Kid





























4. The Free Spirit



































5. The Waif






























6. The Librarian
























7. The Crusader























The Nurturer


Just a Friendly Quote  

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About the most originality that any writer can hope to achieve honestly is to steal with good judgment.  


Josh Billings
1818-1885




Low Calorie Male Archetypes in Romance Writing  

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1. Chief



















2. Bad Boy
















3. Best Friend


















4. Lost Soul



5. The Professor




















6. Swashbuckler



7. Warrior














8. Charmer

More Low Fat Plotting  

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Exposition - Introduces the characters, the setting, the point of view and gives brief background information--not too much too soon.

Opening - Leads the main character to a conflict

Incident - Begins the conflict

Action - Adds new, more complicated incidents, leads to climax

Climax - Very important - Raises conflict to greatest intensity, changes the course of events or the way the reader understands the story. Maybe either an event or an insight.

Falling Action - Optional - Reduces conflict, prepares reader for resolution

Resolution - Ends conflict, leaves the reader satisfied.

Ronald Tobais' 20 Master Plots  

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Ronald Tobais' 20 Master Plots

Quest
Adventure
Pursuit
Rescue
Escape
Revenge
The Riddle
Rivalry
Underdog
Temptation
Metamorphosis
Transformation
Maturation
Love
Forbidden Love
Sacrifice
Discovery
Wretched Existence
Ascension
Descension

Plotting on a Diet - Polti's Brillant Work!  

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Polti's 36 Dramatic Situations

1. Supplication: Persecutor, Suppliant, Authority Figure
2. Deliverance: Unfortunate, Threatener, Rescuer
3. Crime Pursued by Vengence: Criminal, Avenger
4. Vengence taken for Kindred upon Kindred: Avenger, Guilty Remembrance, a Relative of Both
5. Pursuit: Punishment and Fugitive
6. Disaster: Vanquished Power, Victorious Enemy, Messenger.
7. Falling Prey to Cruelty or Misfortune: Unfortunate, Master
8. Revolt: Tyrant, Conspirator
9. Daring Enterprise: Bold Leader, Object, Adversary
10. Abduction: Abductor, the Abducted, Guardian
11. Enigma: Interrogator, Seeker, Problem
12. Obtaining: Solicitor, Adversaryor Arbitrator& Opposing
13. Enmity of Kinsmen: Malevolent Kinsmen, Reciprocally Hated Kin
14. Rivalry of Kinsmen: Preferred Kinsman, Rejected Kin, Object
15. Murderous Adultry: Two Adulterers, Murdered Spouse
16. Madness: Madman, Victim
17. Fatal Imprudence: Imprudent, Victim, Object Lost
18. Involuntary Crimes of Love: Lover, Beloved, Revealer
19. Slaying of Kinsman Unrecognized: Salyer, Unrecognized Victim
20. Self-sacrificing for an Ideal: Hero, Ideal, Creditor, Sacrifice
21. Self-sacrificing for Kindred: Hero, Kinsman, Creditor, Sacrifice
22. All Sacrificed for Passion: Lover, Object of Pasion, Sacrifice
23. Necessity of Sacrificing Loved Ones: Hero, Beloved, Necessity
24. Rivalry of Superior & Inferior: Superior, Inferior, Object
25. Adultery: Two Adulterers, Betrayed Spouse
26. Crimes of Love: Lover, Beloved, SocialNorm
27. Discovery of Dishonor of Beloved: Discovered, Guilty
28. Obstacles to Love: Two Lovers, Obstacles
29. An Enemy Loved: Beloved Enemy, Lover, Hater
30. Ambition: Ambitious Person, Thing Coveted, Adversary
31. Conflict with (a) God: A Mortal, anImmortal or Holy Principle
32. Mistaken Jealousy: Jealous, Object,A ccomplice, Perpetrator
33. Erroneous Judgement: Mistaken One, Victim, Cause, Guilty
34. Remorse: Culprit, Victim or Sin, Interrogator
35. Recovery of Lost One: Seeker, One Found
36. Murder of Loved One: Slain Kinsman, Spectator, Executioner.